Week 35 The running race by Aidan

The four contenders jogged to the starting line – Katie ,Tom , Charlie and Alex. There was a sound of a horn and everybody ran off. Katie was in the lead straight away until Tom caught up and passed her out.  Alex was way behind and Charlie started so fast he tripped and he was taken away.

Katie and Tom were tying. Suddenly Katie tripped and Alex and Tom zoomed past her. Katie was hurt but she kept on going. Katie didn’t win but she did cross the finish line. The crowds went wild-  however, she couldn’t believe what she had just done.

One thought on “Week 35 The running race by Aidan”

  1. Excellent story this week , Aidan. It is a very good and realistic description of a race. Really good use of the prompt. Keep up the good work.

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