Week 23: The Forbidden House: By Liam A

It was a cold winter day my friends and I were outside playing soccer when we saw a man walking into the old house next door. That was when I came up with a cunning plan. If we could sneak into the house we could figure out what that man was doing in there.

We were waiting until he came out and that was when we would strike. Eventually the door opened and he walked out. We walked across the road and we took no notice of the sign that said Keep Out. We climbed in the window and saw everything was robust-looking but the house on the outside looked like it was going to fall down… that was when the house began to crumble…

One thought on “Week 23: The Forbidden House: By Liam A”

  1. Hi Liam A,

    I really like your story.
    Your vocabulary in this story was amazing.
    What happend in the ending did yous make it out?
    Keep up the great work.

    From Jessica H

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