Week 23 The Forest by Dylan

We were in the jungles of Brazil scouring around when we came across a sign saying, “Warning Dinosaurs Exist Here.” We took no notice of the sign because we thought there was no such thing. How wrong we were…

It all started out ok, we heard the peaceful sound of birds singing when suddenly we heard a sort of screeching noise. I knew it was a Velociraptor, but where was it? I knew they were lurking somewhere. Suddenly we heard a rustling in the bushes all around us. ” They’re ambushing us,” I said in terror. We were doomed…

2 thoughts on “Week 23 The Forest by Dylan”

  1. Hi Dylan,

    I found your story very interesting. I like the way you use very interesting describing words. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this 100wc. I would love if you continued this story. What was your favourite part of the story? Keep up the good work.

    Holly~ Ms Brennock’s class

  2. Hi Dylan,
    I really liked your story.
    I liked the way way you involved dinosaurs in your story especially because Velociraptors are my favourite.
    Did any of you survive?
    From Charlie.

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