Week 24: Drama on the Ship by Benny

My dad and I were on a ship to England to see my uncle. The weather was perfect and the sea was calm. We were staying in our cabin and my dad went to get fresh air. He didn’t come back for a while. I decided to check if he was fine. I spotted him so I went over. Suddenly, a big wave hit and my dad lost his balance. He fell over and caught the railing and the side of the ship.

“I’m trying to hold on! he shouted.

One thought on “Week 24: Drama on the Ship by Benny”

  1. Benny,
    Your piece flows very clearly. What a shock, though to have such a peaceful day turn to such a harrowing one. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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