Week 24 Rapid Rabbit By Marc

It was John’s birthday and there was a magnificent magician at the party. The magician pulled a rabbit out of a hat. My Mom brought a cake into the kitchen but we couldn’t see the cake because it was in a box.

The rabbit somehow got out of his cage. He went into the kitchen and ate the cake. When it was time for the cake we opened the box but it was empty. What a surprise! Suddenly we saw the rabbit eating the cake. John went rummaging through the box for a crumb. 

One thought on “Week 24 Rapid Rabbit By Marc”

  1. Marc I do so like the context you’ve chosen for this prompt. I too can certainly imagine what a surprise the empty box would have been.
    I wonder if ‘Somehow the rabbit escaped from his cage’ would sound better than ‘ …. the rabbit got out of his cage.’ What do you think?

    Thanks for posting,
    Jackie (team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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