Week 25: War Escapee by Kayden

I was always last out of the trenches because I would be able to know where the enemies were shooting from. I would wait until my allies all got passed to go because the longer I wait the better chance I have of the enemies ignoring me and searching for my allies.

This pretty much saved my life because after 1 day of the war I did it and managed to run away and leave all of my equipment behind. I also left behind my uniform. The only thing I took with me was a pistol and a tonne of ammunition. I got clothes from a shop and actually was the only person to flee from war and survive…So that is why I am always last.

 

4 thoughts on “Week 25: War Escapee by Kayden”

  1. What a good plan to avoid danger and the terror of war. A very good explanation as to why you’re always last. It’s not by chance – purely by plan!

  2. Hi Kayden. Great work. Where you happy to escape the war? Good paragraphing. Just maybe next time you could use a different word instead of I but other then that well done. Where did you get your inspiration from? Your story reminded of a book I read once. It would be great if you could comment on my story. Here is the link. http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-25/aideen

    Well done.

    From Aideen 🙂

  3. I think I’d wait until last too. I’m not sure I’d be cut out for war. But, I suppose, if it came to it, I’d have to step up and do my part. I feel lucky to live in a peaceful place.

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