Week 27: Dreadful Plan By Naglis

“Let’s rob the jewellery shop” insisted Frank’s chubby pompous boss-Mark. “Alright” Frank answered.

As they sat into the car Mark slurped the last of his cold juicy slushy. Frank was disguised as a guard and tried to distract the rather large guard who was monitoring the shop that night. Quietly Mark dashed into the shop and stole almost every jewel and every single penny.

Suspiciously the guard called the police and reported that some kind of man (Frank) was trying to bamboozle him by telling him to go home! Steve and Mark ran. Although they ran quickly they were not making enough progress…

4 thoughts on “Week 27: Dreadful Plan By Naglis”

  1. Hi Naglis
    I loved the characterization in your story this week. Your superb and well chosen vocabulary really brings them to life and I especially liked the image of the ‘chubby, pompous boss’.
    Miss T
    Stockbridge, Hampshire

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