Week 27 : Lost diamond

I was sprinting away from a monster. I found a hole and I went down there. I don’t even know why I got chased by a monster but then I remembered that I had lost my brother’s diamond.  He said something bad would happen to me.

At this stage, I was upset that the monster came back.  Then I saw an old man standing in front of me.

I said, “Are you OK?”

No response.

I said it again and he turned his back.  He had a white soft beard.

He then said ” you should not be here”  and handed me a book.

“Go follow the book – be careful. ”

He handed me a bat just in case.  Before I went I asked him his name. He said “Jo hung OK”

“Thanks, good luck for the future,” I said and went.

One thought on “Week 27 : Lost diamond”

  1. What an interesting story! I am wondering what on earth was in that book the man handed you!
    You have used speech punctuation really well.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs Badge
    year 5 teacher, Leicester

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