CRASH!
The school bus crashed into a tree on the way to a school trip. The bus driver called a mechanic to come and fix the bus. Luckily there was a picnic area close by and the class sat there to wait for the mechanic. The teacher did a head count to see if all her students were there. There were 3 students missing.
The three boys had gone into the forest. The forest was very dark and there were wolves in it. The mechanic arrived and fixed the bus.
Suddenly the three kids screamed “HELP”. Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress. They heard a wolf howl so they ran even quicker. They arrived at the picnic spot and the mechanic had already fixed the bus. So they all went back to school.
My goodness, Tim. This sounds like every teacher’s worst nightmare, a bus crash and missing children. Hopefully they will have learnt their lesson and not wonder off again, there’s a reason that teachers ensure that their children are with them all of the time!
Miss T
Stockbridge, Hampshire
Well done Tim.
I think those 3 students might have learnt a lesson after that experience. Perhaps the next time they will stay with their class.
Hi Tim,
I like the part when those three boys ran for their life when they heard a wolf howl. Great story Tim and keep up the amazing work. Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK27:-The-Competition/
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