Week 28 The Amazing Robot By Szymon

“Yes!” shouted a scientist. “I have completed the robot.”

He turned it on and it started to pick up the litter that was in the room. Soon after it became a peacemaker and it helped solve all of the problems of the world. No one was homeless or poor. Everyone had clean water and food. There were no more wars and the earth wasn’t polluted.

When the scientist died his son had a plan to destroy the robot and make the earth the same as it was before. He crept up behind the robot and cut it in half. He buried the top part deep underground but left the legs above ground.

6 thoughts on “Week 28 The Amazing Robot By Szymon”

  1. Well done on your writing Szymon.
    You wrote a great story with only 100 words based on a weird and curious picture.
    I really like the imaginative idea in your story and your interesting way of telling it ! Great opening – really grabbed my attention and you kept me interested until the end.
    Your writing is well organised and you’ve done really well with all the events in it. Looking forward to reading your writing in the future.
    Keep up the good work !

    Shane, Teacher
    Dublin, Ireland
    (Team 100)

  2. Great story Syzmon. I am impressed that the robot could solve so many of the world’s problems. It would be great if such a robot existed and we could sort out the world. I think I would put you in charge, you seem to know a lot about lots of the important issues. Of course you’d have to sort the son too!
    Excellent story.
    Well done.
    Ms Brennock

  3. What a great story and a brilliant explanation for the legs with no body!
    I think the world would really benefit from having a few of those Robots as President.

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