One sunny day in the Forest of Sausage there lived a mythical creature called the Long Legged Sausage. A man liked the sound of it and tried to prove to the world that the Long Legged Sausage was real so in the middle of the night he set off into the Forest of Sausage to find the Long Legged Sausage.
At 4.37 he hears thumping across the forest and he responds with his camera held out like a gun. He snapped a picture and dashed away with the Long Legged Sausage running behind him. When he got to his house he shut the door on the monster and knocked him out.
The police came and shook hands with the man and then he was proud.
Hi Aidan
I loved your story
It reminds me of Bigfoot
I wonder what happened with the long-legged sausage was there more ?
Great story By Shane F Mrs O Sullivan’s class
Thats a great story Liam! Reminds me a little of Bigfoot. Keep up the good work!
Hi Liam O,
I like the way the man was brave to find what he truly believe in. Great story and I hope you write more. Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK28:-The-Statue/
From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class
Hi Liam
We thought your writing was the funniest story that we’ve heard this week. We liked how you made up the characters using your imagination. We might suggest you use more exciting words like jail-break, sizzling, colossal and used ketchup!
From Year 5 at Rudham Primary Academy.
Well done Liam on catching the Long Legged Sausage!
Good work.