Week 3 Finally at PEACE by Dylan K

 

One dark, cold night in London there lived a nice, friendly family.  Their father John Browne fought in the war. The children had a tough life. It had its up and downs .  It was coming up to Christmas. The kids were excited to see their Dad.

It was Christmas Day and the Family got up to a heartbreaking letter.

“Dear Mrs. Browne, we are sorry to tell you that your husband is missing and presumed dead.”

The family was devastated after what they had just read.

Suddenly there was a knock at the front door. Luke opened the door to his surprise he saw his Father. The family were finally at peace and had a very happy Christmas.

18 thoughts on “Week 3 Finally at PEACE by Dylan K”

  1. well done Dylan
    brilliant story
    question what if the father did not return and the family were captured and the dad was dead
    kyle out

  2. Hi Dylan K,
    Wow..! I loved your story this week. It was very ummm… what’s that word…bereft at the start.
    I hope nothing else bad happened after the end of the story.

  3. Hi Dylan
    great story I loved reading it .
    I reminded me of the book Billy the kid
    I wonder how they got the letter wrong .
    great story bye Shane F

  4. Hi Dylan. Great story. Good to hear that the family got peace. I’m delighted that they had a happy ending. Did the father stay for long? This reminded me of the Sherlock Holmes movie. I’d like to hear more of our stories.ShaneC

  5. Hi Dylan. Great story. Good to hear that the family got peace. I’m delighted that they had a happy ending. Did the father stay for long? This reminded me of the Sherlock Holmes movie. I’d like to hear more of our stories.

  6. Hi Dylan. I really enjoyed your story,
    It was a sad but interesting story this week.
    This reminds me of 1939-1945.
    I would have been crestfallen if that happened to me.
    At least it’s not true.
    By Aivaras.

  7. hey dylan good story it reminds me of a book I read last year
    there was a very good plot twist in that story
    how did the husband go missing. gary 6th

  8. Hi Dylan
    Really good story!
    The family must have been heartbroken when they read the letter.
    I wonder what the children and their mother were thinking when their father turned up at the door?
    By Calum

  9. Hi Dylan I really enjoyed your story this week it reminded me of a movie where the father goes missing and in the end is found. Who finds the father in the end?
    Well done, Kallum.

  10. Hi Dylan.
    I loved your story. Congratulations on your showcase. It’s a great honour. I love the way your story was happy then sad then happy. Really effective.
    How long did the father stay for? Did the children enjoy Christmas?
    Well done again Dylan.
    Jack.

  11. Hi, Dylan.
    I liked your story.
    It reminded me of a movie in which Nan had magical powers.
    How come the admiral couldn’t be told that the John left?
    Robert

  12. Hi Dylan,
    I thought your story was very sad at the beginning but at the end it was happy! I really liked it.
    Well done.
    Mikolaj,
    Ms Brennock’s 3rd Class

  13. Hi Dylan K.
    I liked your story my favourite part was when the letter came and the guy said it that her husband was missing presumed dead and then he knocks on the door.
    Who wrote the letter was it her husband ?
    Kajus

  14. I’m so delighted there was a happy ending to this story. I’m only guessing the letter had gone to the wrong family or maybe Luke’s dad had been seriously injured but managed to pull through. Whatever the reason, I’m sure it was the best Christmas ever in the Browne household!

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