Week 3: The Haunted house: By Liam A

It was a dull day and my friend and I were going to the haunted house down the road from my house as we were desperate to see what was inside. We were warned not to go in but we didn’t listen.

I told him that I would meet him there at 3pm and when I got there I rested my yellow bicycle on the wall of the house. When my friend arrived I took my torch out of my bag and before I knew it my friend greedily snatched it out of my hand.

As we opened the gate and walked up to the door, it swung open and we were dragged in. My heart was pounding erratically as the door slammed behind us…

4 thoughts on “Week 3: The Haunted house: By Liam A”

  1. Hi Liam story was good but I like what you wrote I like the haunted house I wood go in the haunted goodbye for now keep up your se you next time.

  2. Hi Liam – great job with your story this week. Absolutely thrilling! Although I have to say if I was told to stay away from a haunted House, I would!! Well done and keep up the good work.

  3. Hi Liam A,

    I like your story. I was so intrigued by it. I couldn’t understand how you came up with this brilliant idea could you tell me a tip or two.

    From Your hub buddy Jessica H

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