Week 3: The Thief by Ben

I woke up in the middle of the night. I looked out my window and saw a man with his hood up on a yellow bicycle and holding a bag of money. I rang the police and told them what happened but he had already got away. They told me not to worry.

Mr Brenndon the owner of the bank warned me to pay the mortgage or they would take the house. I was desperate… But then I realised something – Mr Brenndon always went to work on a yellow bicycle. I told the police this and they raided his house. They found what they were looking for. Mr Brenndon confessed. His plan was that the bank would take my house away and he would buy it he said greedily. I was relieved.

3 thoughts on “Week 3: The Thief by Ben”

  1. My goodness been cash that was a terrible plan by Mr. Brenndon! I’m glad that you got to keep your house and the police caught him. Well done and keep up the good work!

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