Week 3, Theme Park Disaster by Tim

Last summer I went to a theme park in London. I went with my mom, my three sisters and my aunt. We had a lot of fun. We got to go on so many rides. It was fun … that was before the incident.
My mom and I went on the Roller Coaster while my sisters and aunt were on the Ferris Wheel . It was fun but then the Roller Coaster seemed to be going backwards half-way through the ride. My mom was scared and I started screaming.
later the mechanics arrived to see what was the problem. They fixed the ride and every thing went back to normal. At the end we all went home and no one was hurt.

2 thoughts on “Week 3, Theme Park Disaster by Tim”

  1. Hi Tim great story I’m happy nobody got hurt and I wonder how it started going backwards .From Tadhg Mrs Boyce’s class . Please comment on mine .

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