Week 30 : An Unexpected Surprise by Christopher

One day, before bed, while I was playing my Xbox my glands suddenly, mysteriously became a bit sore.
The next morning I woke up and my glands were sorer than ever, I had to skip school.
I didn’t have breakfast as every time I opened my mouth, it was like my glands were exploding.

I told my Mom and she said they were very swollen. That day we had my favorite dinner, Spaghetti.
I just couldn’t eat anything so I couldn’t have dinner either. I kept complaining and then my Mom finally arranged a meeting with my doctor.

My doctor gave me medicine and I was better within three days.

3 thoughts on “Week 30 : An Unexpected Surprise by Christopher”

  1. hi Christopher your story was very good.
    also your punctuation is in the correct play good work Christopher

  2. Good story this week Christopher. Was it based on a real life event? The swollen glands sound very painful- it was a really clever way of using the prompt!
    Keep up the good work!
    Ms Gray

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