Week 31 The Rat Tunnel By Ronan

One evening as I was walking through the foggy woods, I noticed a rumbling sound coming from the ground beneath me. I put my ear to the ground to see if I could figure out what it was.

About a minute later the rumbling stopped and a tiny little rat popped out beside me. It did a little cough and about 200 more rats appeared at his side. Suddenly they started to climb up on me trying to push me to the ground and into this wide tunnel that just appeared. They finally brought me down and were heading for the tunnel.

I screamed out for help so loudly that it could’ve made someone deaf but nobody came…

2 thoughts on “Week 31 The Rat Tunnel By Ronan”

  1. Hi Ronan,
    This was a cracking read; I could almost feel all those rats crawling all over me and it made me shiver in disgust! You used some fabulous description to help me picture things in my mind and left me wanting to know more. This is the sign of a talented writer.
    Keep up the great work.
    Mrs Moore Team 100 London

  2. Visualising this story is making me shiver!
    I do hope someone heard that scream …I feel like I’ve heard it here.
    Good work – Ronan. Well done!

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