Week 32 The Midnight Mystery By Evan

One day my friends and I went to the forest because people around town were saying that there was a weird creature there. We looked around and we saw a cottage. We decided we would go inside. Then suddenly it became dark and 2 out of the 5 of us were gone.  Suddenly there was a massive dark looking creature looking down at us so we swiftly started running.  Then the creature disappeared but then my other 2 friends were gone.  Then I was back at the cottage.  Then there was a man with a mask on his face.  Then I felt myself going to sleep…




One thought on “Week 32 The Midnight Mystery By Evan”

  1. Well done Evan.
    This sure was a midnight mystery. I’d love to know more.
    Who was this mystery man with the mask? Was he somehow connected to the weird creature?

    2 things to note – It’s My friends and I … and try not to overuse the word THEN.
    Look for other alternatives – after that – next – soon – later on …

    Keep up the good work.

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