Week 32 The Trek By Liam O M

It was a bright summer’s day when my friends and I went for a hike up the tallest hill in our area, Mt. Raptovest. At the start, we picked a spot to go from and come back to so we set off not realizing what we were getting into.

A couple of hours later it was getting dark so we decided to turn back but it was too late as we had no idea where we were… WE WERE LOST.

One of our friends got really scared and ran off, the rest of us ran after. Until we all got tired and slowed down.  We looked at each other and back to the light. .. Then we disappeared into the night…

2 thoughts on “Week 32 The Trek By Liam O M”

  1. Liam,
    Your piece had me on the edge of my seat. The story seems to show the group trying to stay together by running after the friends who ran off. How dreadful that they all disappeared. I like the scene where they looked at each other and then disappeared—very dramatic.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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