Week 34: A Horrific Start To Spring By Naglis

One Spring day, the countryside was full of beautiful yellow daffodils and gorgeous pink tulips. Billy who was the child of the rich pompous mayor was sitting beside the huge bridge which was leading to the centre of town.

Later he went to play in the park with his friends. They were so tired after it that Billy decided to buy a cool refreshing ice-cream with crushed chocolate sprinkled on top. Everyone went home but Billy stayed sitting on the bridge.

Suddenly a man came up to him and put him to sleep with chloroform. As soon as he woke up he asked nervously “Where am I”?

4 thoughts on “Week 34: A Horrific Start To Spring By Naglis”

  1. Hi Naglis,

    Great use of the prompt this week! Your use of adjectives is fantastic, well done for not using the same old boring ones and being more daring. I thought your use of the word ‘pompous’ was excellent. Using adjectives in this way really allows me to picture the story in imagination vividly. This can be challenging for a writer to achieve with only 100 word to use, but you have achieved this!

    Keep up the great work!
    From Miri from the UK (Team 100 Word Challenge)

  2. Hi Naglis
    I really like your story. What did the kidnapper look like. Why did Billy not go home with his friends.? Keep up the good work.

Comments are closed.