Week 35 The Sinking of The Titanic by Ronan

There was a girl on the Titanic looking for a  better life for her family. She had never been to America but she was sure it would be better than Ireland at the time. Being a third class passenger was better than being no passenger…She had thought.

One night just about thirteen miles off the coast of America her mom was feeling very sick and was sure to die soon. She was about to die because she was not being taken care of properly and that was all her fault. However she could not believe what she had done. Suddenly she heard a crash and the scrape. She woke the family and got them dressed. She knew the boat would sink