Week 37 Emergency By Jack

It had been raining all morning and my by baby sister was beginning to be a bit cranky. My mom was trying to calm her down but she just kept on crying. I was getting a bit annoyed as well because our internet was not great and I was trying to play a little bit of Fortnite before the internet went ZAP …I sighed.

Just then I heard the crack of thunder and the sky lit up for a split second.

“LUCAS!” I heard my brother scream. “Call the  fire brigade.”

I grabbed my phone and ran into the kitchen and then I saw it …our back garden was on fire.

I dialled 999 as fast as I could – told them the situation and where I lived and before long we were all safe.

One thought on “Week 37 Emergency By Jack”

  1. Hi Jack,

    Exciting story! As a fellow Fortnite player I can empathise with the character. It is annoying when the internet cuts out. I like the way you structured your story. You set the scene at the beginning and split up the action parts into short lines which made it much easier to read. I’m glad you know what to do in the event of a fire. That shows real maturity. Just remember to leave as soon as possible and don’t stop to collect any belongings. Keep up the good work.

    Michael (Team 100wc), London, UK

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