It was a scorching day in the Sahara. My Dad and I were explorers and we have put historical animals in the natural history museum in Dublin.
As we packed our tents into our bags, I saw a tiny triangular shape under us. We brushed away the sand and saw a yellow block. It was a pyramid we took out our shovels and dug. My dad studied pyramids for years and he knew that the entrance was near the top.
We got in and saw a light leading to a tomb. We followed the light and saw gold and a viola. As we searched we saw an ancient mummy. It was amazing… That was when we noticed it was the lost Egyptian.
Hi Liam,
Firstly I loved the father and son archeological team in your story and the background information of this team putting historical animals in the Natural History Museum in Dublin, it was a great introduction.
I found your piece exciting to read as you described the discovery and entry into the pyramid very well, there was a great use of adjectives throughout.
I hope these two go on many adventures together in the future.
Well done and keep writing.
Another great story Liam – Well done!
That was an amazing discovery.