Week 4: The amazing dog by Dan

One day I went for a walk down a lane behind my mansion.
I also brought the dog. Suddenly I heard a strange bark.
My dog and I hid behind a bush.
We found a pair of glasses.
“Put them on boy, ” I whispered.

POOF! He scuttled away.
A minute later he came back with another dog.
When we got home the dog spoke. “Ruffy ruff” he barked.
I asked my dog to translate “Please to meet you,” he said

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8 thoughts on “Week 4: The amazing dog by Dan”

  1. Kia Ora Dan. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge! You have paid attention to punctuation and spelling, and included some great words like ‘whispered’ and ‘poof’. Keep up the excellent writing.
    Heidi (Team 100, New Zealand).

  2. I love your imagination a talking dog that’s great I hope you get showcased because your story was so great

  3. Hi Dan. I really like how you laid out your story. Your use of speech marks is very good and I love how you used the word ‘Poof’ to describe the dog as he scuttled away.

  4. Good story Dan it would be really interesting to see what happens next. Great imagination well done Dan.

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