Week 4 Dave’s story by Ben

My name is Dave and this is my story. I was 21 years old at the time. I was walking in the wood at 1 o’clock in the morning. I thought I heard someone. About 20 minutes later something moved out from the trees. It looked horrible .There was blood driping from its mouth. It looked like a fifteen foot bear but it had the head of a t-rex. I ran back to the car as fast as I could and turned the key when it just wouldn’t take off…

3 thoughts on “Week 4 Dave’s story by Ben”

  1. Hello Ben, I particularly like your first sentence. It immediately made me interested and I wanted to find out what was Dave’s story. It had many scary bits to the story too. Well done.

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