My name is Dave and this is my story. I was 21 years old at the time. I was walking in the wood at 1 o’clock in the morning. I thought I heard someone. About 20 minutes later something moved out from the trees. It looked horrible .There was blood driping from its mouth. It looked like a fifteen foot bear but it had the head of a t-rex. I ran back to the car as fast as I could and turned the key when it just wouldn’t take off…
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Hello Ben, I particularly like your first sentence. It immediately made me interested and I wanted to find out what was Dave’s story. It had many scary bits to the story too. Well done.
Hi Ben,
I liked your story a lot, especially since I like creepy stories!
Did dave make it out alive? What did the creature do to him?
Maybe you can check out my story and leave a comment on
https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/emlf2e0ssa75t2ppnublej6o2
Hi Ben
Great story
It reminds me of a movie
Please comment on my story
https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/category/darragh/
From Darragh