Week 4 The dog by Matthew D

Finally the school week was over and it was Friday once again -the best day of the week. I was going over to my friend Jake’s house. Eventually  I got to his house but when I opened the door and the dog was wearing glasses. My smile was as wide as an elephants bottom when I saw him.

I asked Jake why was his dog wearing glasses and it was because his dog was unique. Subsequently we played some video games and ate some pizza.  Soon after I went home

6 thoughts on “Week 4 The dog by Matthew D”

  1. Well done Matthew!! You’ve made everybody laugh with your story this week! That sounds like you had a very big smile indeed. I like your use of the word ‘subsequently’ too.
    Great writing, well done.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hi Matthew,
    Thank you for sharing your 100WC with us this week, it made me smile when I read it.
    Your choice of simile was very ‘interesting’! I liked your vocabulary choices too, especially ‘subsequently’ and ‘eventually’.
    Keep writing and sharing! 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK.

  3. Hi Matthew D,

    I like the part when you said your smile was wider than a elephant’s bottom and I hope you write more stories.Please visit my story on hppts:mrrussell.100wc.net/The-DNA-Dog/

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

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