Week 4 The dog by Matthew D

Finally the school week was over and it was Friday once again -the best day of the week. I was going over to my friend Jake’s house. Eventually  I got to his house but when I opened the door and the dog was wearing glasses. My smile was as wide as an elephants bottom when I saw him.

I asked Jake why was his dog wearing glasses and it was because his dog was unique. Subsequently we played some video games and ate some pizza.  Soon after I went home

6 thoughts on “Week 4 The dog by Matthew D”

  1. Well done Matthew!! You’ve made everybody laugh with your story this week! That sounds like you had a very big smile indeed. I like your use of the word ‘subsequently’ too.
    Great writing, well done.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

  2. Hi Matthew,
    Thank you for sharing your 100WC with us this week, it made me smile when I read it.
    Your choice of simile was very ‘interesting’! I liked your vocabulary choices too, especially ‘subsequently’ and ‘eventually’.
    Keep writing and sharing! 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK.

  3. Hi Matthew D,

    I like the part when you said your smile was wider than a elephant’s bottom and I hope you write more stories.Please visit my story on hppts:mrrussell.100wc.net/The-DNA-Dog/

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

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