Week 4: My New Best Friend: By Liam A

It was a dull day my brother and I were on our bikes in the park. When we got to the bend we saw a bird on the ground and when it just wouldn’t take off we knew he was hurt. I went close and I heard my brother mumble, ” it’s futile – he’s just going to die anyway.” I picked him up and put him in my coat pocket with his head peeping out.

When we got home I brought him up to my room. I could see his wing was broken. I got a bit of paper and put it around his arm. A few days later he was back to normal and able to fly. I let him out and he was gone.

2 thoughts on “Week 4: My New Best Friend: By Liam A”

  1. Liam,

    I love your story about the bird! I wonder how he got hurt? I like how you described how it was a dull day. That wasn’t nice of your brother to say that the bird was just gonna die. Cause guess what! It didn’t! I was glad that the bird was able to fly again. You wrote a good prompt!

    -Jimmy

  2. Dear Liam,
    I love how creative the story was, and how many good words you used to describe your amazingly written story.
    Sincerely,
    Diya Illinois, USA

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