Week 4 Teleportation by Joe

Niall was not having a good day.

“Mom do you know where my console charger is?”  he said.

There was no answer. Then it hit him …literally… a cardboard thing hit him and hard. It said Mom gone out.

“Outside then!” he said.

There were some lights that formed a ball and a dog was wearing glasses. Plus it sent him to another dimension. “Harry” he screamed in a strange dopey voice. It was the evil rat. “Here we go,” said Harry. “It’s a wand.”

“Expleamous! “said Niall knocking him off a cliff. “Run” Niall screamed. He went back to his dimension and found …his charger. Mam came home and made a cake.

8 thoughts on “Week 4 Teleportation by Joe”

  1. Well done on your story Joe. I laughed when he got hit on the head – I hope it was too painful! Things turned out well, he got his charger and he got cake. That’s good ending!
    Keep up the great writing.

  2. Hi Joe,

    I like the part when you found your charger and I hope you write more stories.Please visit my story on hppts://mrrussell.100wc.net/The-DNA-Dog/

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. I really loved your story it was great and he and I like when he got hit with the cardboard that was really funny I can’t wait for your next story good job bro

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