Week 4 The Amusement Park By Benny

I was finally allowed to go to the amusement park by myself. I decided to bring 3 close friends with me. As we walked in I could smell the delicious smell of popcorn. We chose to go on the rides instead. We split up since we all wanted to go on different rides. I decided to go on a horror ride. The people who just got off were as pale as ghosts and that sent shivers down my spine. I hopped on and was ready to go when it just wouldn’t take off. We were told that the ride needed some fixing. I was disappointed that I didn’t get to go on that ride.

One thought on “Week 4 The Amusement Park By Benny”

  1. Hello Benny,

    That was a good take on the prompt.
    Arrangement of the events leading to the prompt is just apt.
    Keep up the good work.

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