Week 4 : The fleet rescue by JACOB

When it just wouldn’t take off I was freaking out – then I saw the engines on fire

I shouted “FIRE, FIRE, FIRE!!!” The crew on the carrier put out the flames and one of them said: “next time don’t scream.”

My face was blushing. A few minutes later I saw a battleship on fire in the distance. I got into a helicopter and the ship looked very robust. When I got to it people were screaming for help. I brought them back to the carrier. The captain of the fleet thanked me and made me rescue commander. I was happy.


One thought on “Week 4 : The fleet rescue by JACOB”

  1. Hello Jacob,

    A good take on the prompt, by starting off with it.
    A little bit more of arranging the sentence structure can make it more refreshing.
    Good work, keep it up.

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