Week 4 The Gathering by Mathew O G

Running through the dense pine trees I was gasping for breath uncontrollably. I would not leave until I had it.

“What are you even looking for”? groaned Jim.

“YOU KNOW WELL WHAT WE’RE LOOKING FOR, YOU TWAT!” I answered back furiously.

Finally, we found it –  the last animal statue.  Finally, we could go back in time. We headed back to Ireland to put all the statues together. When we got there Jim was exhilarated. We eventually reached the centre of the forest and placed the three statues facing each other… Then the ground began to shake and a purple portal opened in the ground…

4 thoughts on “Week 4 The Gathering by Mathew O G”

  1. Matthew, I liked the way you drop us into your story with all the action happening. Sometimes if you use the same beginning word in three consecutive sentences, it makes a dramatic point. Your use of ‘ Finally’ almost made it. What an exciting story! I want to know what happens next. Keep on writing!

    Mrs A (Team 100WC)

  2. Hi Jack, I really liked your story it was amazing.
    How did you come up with that story?
    I liked your story because it made me laugh and it was really interesting.

    Ms Brennocks class


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