Week 4 The House by Dylan

My heart was pounding, sweat was running down my face. I was terrified. I was after sneaking into the old abandoned house with my friend Derek and the door shut behind us.

We were in total darkness until I turned on the torch on my phone. What we saw was horrifying, there was a man in a clown costume!

We kicked the door open and ran. We hopped into my car but when it just wouldn’t take off I got out and realised the tyres were slashed…

Then someone tapped me on the shoulder but it was not Derek…

One thought on “Week 4 The House by Dylan”

  1. Dear, Dylan
    I really liked how you gave details on how you felt and what your surroundings looked like, it really made me feel like I was standing right next to you guys and seeing in first person what was happening. I also liked how you left on a cliff hanger it really made me want to read more.
    Maybe you could come check out mine and leave me a comment!!
    https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/ac2n90rgm4dcr5s7hl8u8zvc6#comments

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