Week 4 The Injured Bird BY Adam

My friends and I were outside when we saw a bird and it was chirping. We went over and tried to help it when it just wouldn’t take off. Our attempts to help the bird were futile because it had a broken wing. We were very glum because we couldn’t help so we put it in a box and took it to the vet. A few days later we collected it and when we got home we extricated it to the wild. The bird came back very often so we started to feed the bird and named it Jamal. The bird really loved us.

2 thoughts on “Week 4 The Injured Bird BY Adam”

  1. Hi, Adam .

    I liked your story.
    The name Jamal reminds me of something .
    You are a very talented writer.

    From, Mia
    Ms Brennocks class

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