Week 4 The Plane By Joe

I walked outside and saw large dark clouds approaching but they weren’t clouds –  it was actually a U.F.O.  cannon and there were 8 beams of light all joined together like a death ray.

We have been getting reports of a laser coming to destroy Earth and it was going to happen in 2 days. Everybody was scared and most people were already gone. We were trying to get a flight.

The time came and we rushed to the plane. On the plane we were waiting for the flight to start but when it just wouldn’t take off I was getting nervous. We were running out of time . . .

2 thoughts on “Week 4 The Plane By Joe”

  1. Hi Joe
    What an interesting idea you have written for the 100WC. I also like the cliffhanger ending of your writing. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  2. Hello Joe,

    Good attempt with the prompt, as also the storyline.
    Could do some rearrangement with the buildup to the story.
    Keep the good work.

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