19/9/2015
I woke up for my second day of prison. I went to the cafeteria and met the gang and found out that they were going to escape. I was hooked in. They already had the key card so they could let everyone out of their cells to make a massive distraction. Then we would use the key card to open the door, get into a car and escape. The plan was faultless.
The next morning we opened the cells and ran through the prison. We opened the door and got to the car…When it just wouldn’t take off, we got caught
Hey Evan, I loved how you squished so much detail into your story. I like your use of words and how well you placed them. Keep up the good work, Evan!
Check out mine. Here’s the link…
https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/b45axq68ai6e67tiukf55oc4w
Evan Jander
Hi Evan,
I thought your story was great.
I liked the use of the prompt and thought it was amazing.