It was the day of the spaceship take off to Space. 3 people were on board- 2 men and 1 woman. I was watching it live from tv. I thought this trip was futile but I still watched it anyway. So they were ready to take off – the men were testing everything to make sure it was ready.
Soon it was ready but all the 3 were waving out the window. When it just wouldn’t take off the men did everything they could and it still wouldn’t take off. So they postponed the trip for another year while they try to figure out what was wrong with it.
Hello Warren,
I really liked how your story went to an seeming to be epic space journey to a failed space flight.
What inspired you to make it? Were they able to do the next space flight?
Maybe you can check out my story, I think you might like it.
https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/emlf2e0ssa75t2ppnublej6o2
Hi warren
I really liked your story because the checked everything and it didn’t go
I like your grammar
From your hub buddy Craig
Hi Warren,
What a great story!
I love the use of the word futile. I hope the space mission goes according to plan next time!
Regards,
Mrs O Sullivan.