Week 5 The Tallest Man On Earth By Evan

Hi, my name is Patrick I am 36 years old. My dad is a scientist.

One day I wanted to become stronger. So I asked my dad could he give me a potion that would make me stronger. He gave me the potion and I drank it. But it made me so tall. When I asked him what happened he said he gave me the wrong potion. So I asked him if he had an antidote and he said no. But he said he could make one later. I went out shopping and very soon there were news reporters outside the shop.

I was famous.

2 thoughts on “Week 5 The Tallest Man On Earth By Evan”

  1. Hi Evan,
    I thought your story was great.
    I loved the idea of the potions.
    Your story reminds me of Minecraft.
    – Charlie

  2. Hi Evan,
    So your beginning was a little straight forward and I wasn’t really getting pulled into the story, also you didn’t give much description. I think you could have done better by maybe putting some dialogue.

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