Week 5 My Treasured Item by Colin

it reminds me of when I was at the County final- Kanturk vs Mallow. I saw all of the green and red players and felt proud we were in the final.I had my hurley and helmet because we were playing at halftime. I was nervous and a small bit scared but the time came we went on and we all played hard and beat Mallow 2 to 1. Soon the big players came on and we jogged off in delight when the match was over. Kanturk won. I went on to the pitch and Kanturk lifted the cup At the end I met a few players and my mom got all of them on her phone.

Hint:  It is on the camera.

8 thoughts on “Week 5 My Treasured Item by Colin”

  1. A great story Colin…what an exciting day for you! I’m guessing it is a picture of you with your favourite player? Nice memories

  2. Well done Colin and well done Kanturk GAA. It must have been a very exciting week after winning a county and with a football final to come. I think Mrs Boyce might be right.

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  4. I like it because it is well described and hard to guess. Is it a picture on your mums phone. Or is its a moment in time. It’s hard to tell!

  5. What a super job you’ve done this week, Colin! It sounds like that was a very special day! I am torn between two things, so i’m going to guess both! I think that your treasured item is either a photo of you with the players, or a video of you with the players. I hope i’m right! Keep up the great work!

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  7. Well done Colin. You have described your most treasured item well.
    A very original piece and I’m sure the County champions would love it!
    Is it a video? One to cherish I’m sure.

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