Week 5 : My Treasured Item by Tadhg

I love my treasured item that I have. It sits in my pocket every day and every night. It gives me luck and it’s been passed down from generation to generation for a very long time. My friends think it’s stupid. It was given to me by my favourite grandad. Sometimes I take it out and stare at the bronze treasure. My dad wanted to take it from me when I was foolish. When I hold it close it reminds me of my grandad and all the nice things he did for me. I love my treasured item so much that I will never give it to anyone.

5 thoughts on “Week 5 : My Treasured Item by Tadhg”

  1. Hi Tadhg,
    I like the explanation and Keep up the good work.Please comment on my story at hptss://mrrussell.100wc.net/My-Smart-Precious-Thing/

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  2. I really like how this was an item passed down from generation to generation! There aren’t many clues as to what it might be, I have no idea, you win

  3. I was extremely stumped by this one as there aren’t many clues as to what this might be! I really like how this was an item passed down from generation to generation! I also really like how this reminds you of your grandad who was definitely a great man! I think it might be a coin, a medal or some type of figurine! I really do hope that whatever it is doesn’t go missing!

  4. This is a simply brilliant piece of writing – well done Tadhg! I think that yours is one of the best descriptions that I have read this week. I loved the way you described it as a “bronze treasure”. I think that it might be a coin or medallion. Keep up the GREAT writing!

    Mr. Russell
    Team 100
    Waterford, Ireland

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