Running through the woods I could hear my heart beating like a drum, the cracking of tree trunks snapping in half and the giants’ feet shaking the ground. Then I looked behind me and they were gone – there wasn’t a sound only the rustling of the leaves on the trees.
Suddenly the giants pounced out from everywhere. I was surrounded. There was no escape…Suddenly I could hear the roaring engines of trucks. It started to rain and I saw that the giants were in pain. The army ran up the hill and started firing at them. Suddenly all of the monsters looked up and turned to stone.
Hi Liam,
Your story is excellent. It has lots of great vocabulary and a variety of sentence starters. I agree with Cillian it was very easy to visualise the action in your story.
Great work this week.
Well done.
Ms Brennock
Dublin
Hi Liam
I really liked your story a lot because it was very exciting and I could visualize it very well. It reminded me a little of a movie called the BFG. Why was he getting chased? From Cillian St Molagas, please check out my story.
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