Week 7 The Worst Day By Joe

Sadly, today was the worst day ever. It started off when there was no more cereal so I had to go to school ravenous. When I got to school I asked my teacher could I have a little bit of my lunch. Unlucky for me she was extra cantankerous and wouldn’t let me eat my lunch until break time.

When I got home and went into the living room my mom started to lambast me. She told me that I had taken her diamond ring . I started to deny saying that I didn’t do anything,” but where did it go ” she shouted . . .

2 thoughts on “Week 7 The Worst Day By Joe”

  1. Hi Joe,
    Well done on a great story. I find it hard to believe that a teacher could be cantankerous!!! I hope the ring turned up. Great vocabulary was used and the story flowed very well.
    Mrs O’ Sullivan.

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