Week 7: Agent Black Widow by Liam

Computer hacking! Ha, like I would like to do something so devious and illegal. That’s what I would’ve said when I was younger, but now I’m the best security firewall disabler and the most brilliant account hacker in the world. If it’s a hack I made it

Although I’ve done all that, I still to this day haven’t been able to get inside the main super computer of The Pentagon. A highly advanced facility with biological weapons that could take out a nation.

Finally, I came up with a simple but ingenious design with so many possibilities and tools. I call it Agent 008: The Black Widow. I now want to have the opportunity of a lifetime to see all the projects that go on inside that base.

14 thoughts on “Week 7: Agent Black Widow by Liam”

  1. Hi Liam that was a great story it was so good that you got a showcase well done.
    Agent Black was a great title.
    I will read more of your stories.
    Well done.
    Shane C 5th

  2. Hi Liam,
    I loved this story.I thought it was funny how you named it 008 after James Bond (A.K.A 007)and Black Widow from Marvel.Did you manage to hack into the super computers?If so what happened?-Kayden

  3. Hi Liam,
    Congratulations on the showcase.
    This story reminds me of a book I read.
    Will the police catch you anytime soon?
    Dylan K

  4. Hi Liam.
    WOW this story is mind-blowing.
    I would like to explore the pentagon.
    Why is the name “Black Widow”?

  5. Liam nice piece agent black widow thats a cool name to. Also I can see why you got a showcase too. keep up the great work to!:)

  6. Thanks for all the amazing comments. A huge thank you to Avril Dalton, who recommended this story for a showcase, I was just told that I got a showcase and I’m really happy about it. Liam

  7. Hi Liam! I really like this story. I’ve always been interested with hacking but you can do it for good. I heard that if you successfully hack a big company and tell them you can get hundreds of euros.
    What will you do when you hack the Pentagon? Start World War 3? Stop them from doing anything bad? Well I Hope you don’t start World War 3.

  8. Hi Liam

    I’m not so sure there’s much left for me to say as Mrs Boyce and Avril have both described your writing perfectly. You obviously have an imaginative approach to writing and the fact that you have taken the prompt and written about something a little different is great. This reads like an extract from a book about spies as you have managed to control your writing and not cram too many ideas and too much action in.

    Miss T
    Team 100wc
    Hampshire UK

  9. Now Liam! Take a bow. When I’m reading the 100 wc stories every week – and I read LOTS, I’m aways blown away when story that takes the prompt a little bit ‘outside the box’ if you know what I mean. You’ve done EXACTLY that this week and I’m super impressed. You’ve used the prompt, but in a unique way. Mrs. Boyce sums it up brilliantly – It’s a prompt about a spider but ‘not a spider in sight’. The story itself is excellent and I love how you describe trying to break into the Super Computer of the Pentagon. I’d love to hear more about this ‘Black Widow’. I’m going to recommend this super piece of work for Showcase. Best of luck!

  10. Hi liam
    Your story was great very creative, excellent work .
    You described every thing great so well done and dont forget to check mine out at @smppspower.weebly.com

  11. Well done Liam – I loved your take on this week’s prompt.
    It was refreshing to read a story without a SPIDER in sight!
    I like the way you are so proud of what you do – even though it is illegal.
    Keep up the great work.

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