Week 7 Soul catcher on the loose By Colin

She ran up a fleet of stairs. Her breath ragged and rasping. “The soul catcher must be up here” she said. She rounded a corner and burst through a double doors. Up ahead in the long white corridor a ghost-like figure hovered off the ground.

She looked down and pulled her revolver from the holster. She rapidly raised her head and could feel the sweat trickling down her cheek. “But where did it go?” she shouted as she ran down the corridor. She rounded a sharp corner and sprawled to the ground. Suddenly she felt a figure pounce on her.

2 thoughts on “Week 7 Soul catcher on the loose By Colin”

  1. Colin,
    What an excellent story. It was gripping and exciting. You described the panic and tension so well.
    keep up the good work.
    Mrs O’ Sullivan.

  2. Hi Colin – you have written a terrific story this week. And what a cliffhanger at the end! I’d love to read more about what happened next. You used some great vocabulary in the story too, which made it a pleasure to read. Well done and keep up the great work!

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