Week 9 The Door By Szymon

“Whatever happens- do not open this door!” roared the astronaut. I wondered what was behind the door?

” Picture this – you are stuck in a room with the most dangerous thing you can imagine,” yelled the astronauts. The astronaut’s voice was convincing but gentle. “I can’t wait to learn more about this place,” I said.

I just went onto my first space station but little did I know it was also my last one.

When everyone fell asleep I sneaked over to the door and opened it. I went in and suddenly something grabbed me by the ankles and roughly tripped me.

2 thoughts on “Week 9 The Door By Szymon”

  1. Good idea of the story! But maybe you should fix the grammatical errors like you said “sneaked” instead you should of said “snuck” “When everyone fell asleep I snuck over to the door and opened it” But overall good job!

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