Week:7 HALLOWEEN by Kacper

My friends and I were TRICK or TREATING. After that, I wanted to go to a haunted house. But my friends were really scared. I said, “fine I’ll go by myself.” So I did. It was cold. I heard someone chuckle. I shouted HELP. No one responded when I was in a corridor. As the door slammed I knew I was in danger. BUT lucky me I found a flashlight. But there were no batteries.

No why me?  Well it wasn’t that bad – I found a window and finally I was out.

5 thoughts on “Week:7 HALLOWEEN by Kacper”

  1. Great writing Kacper! You story was like a roller-coaster, it had lots of up and downs! I’m glad that everything finally worked out well for you!
    Have a happy Halloween!
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hi Kacper,

    Great story! It had lots of twists in it which helped build suspense and made it really spooky. Who was chuckling? A vampire? A creepy clown? Who knows….
    Just remember, if you do go trick-or-treating with your friends, always stick together. It can be really scary out in the dark on your own. Well done.

    Michael (Team 100wc), Warwick, UK.

  3. We liked your story! Maybe next time you could find some other words for said and but. Well done!

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