WK 5 The snowy Day, By Mikolaj

It was the 23rd of December and it started to snow. I am 17 years old now so I don’t really play in the snow at this time. It started to snow heavily and the ground was nearly filled up with snow.

It reminded me of a time when I was 5 and I was building a snowman with my Dad. I asked my family to go and look to see if the lake was filled up with ice. When we got there and I looked at it and it was completely covered up with ice.

We came back home and lit a fire and enjoyed the rest of our day!

3 thoughts on “WK 5 The snowy Day, By Mikolaj”

  1. The text reveals a solid sense of structure. Your use of a flashback is very effective here. You can continue using this sort of plot; just make sure that your reader can envision the image of winter being described in the text.

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