Worst Holiday Ever by Sean

My family and I are going on holiday this weekend to see the aquarium and the zoo. When we arrived we got some food. On the menu, there was a purple avocado, bones and elephant steak. After the food we got our hotel room. 1 day later we went to see the aquarium. There were seahorses stingrays and whales After the aquarium a strange man was looking at us He was in a black coat, black hat and a navy pants and old looking shoes                                                                                                                                                                                                  The strange man put his hand in my dad’s pocket and took his wallet and ran away. After that, we went home.

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  1. Well Sean that is a lovely recount, right up to the end when I was surprised by the stealing of the wallet! You have combined the words really well and written it well. Thank you.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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